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I have chosen idea 3 because it inspired me to inspire other teenage girls like myself. Things like being the big sister they never had, or just helping them feel normal in a society with really unfair standards for teenage girls. I want them to know it is not normal to have loads of money in their savings, things that they may feel pressure about like being behind and when they read the magazine I hope they feel like they aren't. I think I will have so much fun with this project as my final college project before university because of the topics I will talk about, gathering my friends together to help me. 

Peer Feedback- Leyton Taylor

Key strengths:

I would say the idea has quite a lot of depth has a lot of different pages/topics that she could touch on.

I also think this is quite a challenging project and it will be difficult which is good for her as it will test her skills.

It is also quite an innovative idea that has a unique style that I haven’t seen before.

I also think it will be good as she and her friends are the demographic which means she knows what the target audience wants from the project and the magazine.

How will it help:

I would say that the project will help improve her skills and really push her which will make her a better designer in the long run.

Suggestions:

Make things like ‘how will I get a good grade’ a bit more detailed.

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